Cute Anime Girl :D

[mewball]

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/336/7/c/cutesy_girl_by_mewball-d343v1q.png

Mew finally finished it :D it took forever but I love the outcome :3:2thumb:

[Okitaru]

Nice. the left leg (from the characters standpoint) I don't think it would naturally go that far in a normal pose, but that's all i can think of if you were looking for a critique.

Better coloring than I can do though QQ

[Paul]

Hmm, looks kinda strange. I highly agree with the leg/foot thing. Hands might need a little work, and character is angled at a very awkward position. (Head is turned but still looking at us yet her body is somewhat turned towards us too). Sleeve for the right arm is kinda messed up, makes it look like she broke her arm. Probably just me but the shading for the skirt seems really weird and off. Few more things but i'll leave it at that.

Though I like the coloring.

[mewball]

I agree with the foot thing, sleeve thing, and arm thing lol. i don't understand the skirt one though owo

[Paul]

The lighting and shadowing.

I'm assuming the light is coming from her right (so on the left of the picture) but from what I can see, theres apparently light in front of her too? That or it might be one light NorthEast of the direction shes facing. If it was NorthEast of the direction shes currently facing, then a lot of the shadows shouldn't be there.

That or I'm just delusional about shading and skirts.

[Ruquion]

Just because it's anime doesn't mean it needs eyes the size of half it's face, IMHO.

[Science]

Just because it's anime doesn't mean it needs eyes the size of half it's face, IMHO.

This is like, your catchphrase :U

I feel like there's a huge fold of clothing under her... bosom. Unno.

[Murasaki]

Very cute. The colors go well together.

The legs get a little wonky. From how she's standing, it looks like the leg on her right (our left) should be up higher, because that side of her body is going back in space. Also, the 2 lines of shading on the chest representing the folds feel to prominent for 2 reasons: They're as dark as the underside of her chest, even though that's on one of the light parts of the body. Also, they just don't go there. Breasts push things forward and stretch them out. You're missing shadow on the sleeve on our right. Need a drop shadow from the hoodie to the skirt, as well.

Overall, though, it's cute and has a nice color harmony.

[Lan]

She seems sort of stocky.

[Tiiria]

I agree with the previously stated critiques. The boobs bother me with the fact that there's an entire line there. It's like. No. Boobs don't do that. It may be acceptable if it was a tight shirt, but the thing is loose everywhere else so it makes it look like the shirt has a really weird cut. And it looks like there should be more shading under the breasts if you were to keep that line, it kinda seems like you can't decide if she has girly boobs or big boobs. The line there just bothers me. DX Other than that, yes, very cute. :>

[TA]

She kinda scares me, not to be mean.

[Mentosftw]

She needs a longer left leg. I'm surprised she can stand with her center of balance like that without a cane.