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Halfslashed
06-01-2010, 10:40 PM
So I made yet another signature... this one to the best of my ability, and I think it looks pretty good, but it's for you guys to judge.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg43/killaman94/NewerSiggy.png

Opinions, suggestions, and other constructive critisism are appreciated.

BobYoMeowMeow
06-01-2010, 10:56 PM
the mabinogi head is kind of blurry the cat thinks

Skye
06-01-2010, 11:28 PM
I'm not too fond of the font you used for your username and server. When it's red, it's kind of difficult to focus on. Or something. ._.
I think the concept of your signature is good, though. :D But it's just kind of like...splat, it's done. But the more you make, the better you'll get, so the better they'll look. :)

Byte
06-01-2010, 11:39 PM
First off... what program? 3;

Hiccup
06-01-2010, 11:43 PM
Dun like. D:

♪★ Scandalous ☆ ♫
06-02-2010, 01:01 AM
Maybe if you made the head more transparent and centered it, and then made the words"Beast within" look more vanishy and a more discrete font ..but have them going across and not stuck in a corner.
But I see what you did thar:2thumb:

Kyouria
06-02-2010, 01:03 AM
I'm not too fond of the font you used for your username and server. When it's red, it's kind of difficult to focus on. Or something. ._.
I think the concept of your signature is good, though. :D But it's just kind of like...splat, it's done. But the more you make, the better you'll get, so the better they'll look. :)
I agree with Skye. The concept is good, but the text on the signature doesn't seem to fit. Maybe you can try blending the text or using a similar color tone from the background---that way, the text won't be like "splat" but instead, complement it. ^^;

Yogurticecream
06-02-2010, 01:12 AM
The head looks odd with the signature background.

Nakishu
06-02-2010, 04:24 AM
I agree with the cat, it's a bit blurry.

Tiiria
06-02-2010, 02:05 PM
The red is indeed a bit hard to read. I suggest instead of a pure red, use a different tint or shade of some sort. I think you should feather the edges of your head there. It sort of stands out and screams at the viewer too much. The upper right corner looks kind of awkward. You have text and pictures covering the one side of the image and the bottom right section, but with nothing up there. It's got a kind of odd balance. One possible solution is to make the head smaller. I kinda just disagree with the head for the most part. :XD:

Halfslashed
06-02-2010, 06:48 PM
The head was meant to be blurry to be honest, I used paint.net AKB, and that was the most fitting text I could find.

Thanks for the critism

Byte
06-02-2010, 07:29 PM
The head was meant to be blurry to be honest, I used paint.net AKB, and that was the most fitting text I could find.

Thanks for the critism

Eheh, for a fux pro modder, I'd expect you to have Photoshop CS5. If you need it, PM me. :P