Need Critiques for NationTV Intro rough draft

[Hiccup]

So I just finished editing a rough draft of the NationTV introduction. Been working on it basically all day. (the day started at 12:40 this morning:T_T:) So I want people to give their feedback on what I've done so far. It's nothing permanent unless its really good owo

Only a select few can see it, soo first come first serve!
http://mabination.com/mabinogi/multimedia-fantasy/5703-nationtv-intro-beta-uploaded-ready-watch.html#post97650

[Moppy]

I'll check it out.

[Papaya Pok Pok]

I'll take a look at it

[Science]

I guess I'll look at it too.

[Lan]

Hmm me too but I probably wouldn't be able to give you any constructive criticism

[Time]

Well, if ya need one more, im here.

[Hiccup]

Ok well its rendering right now so :l

[Cannibal]

Dammit, I wanted to see...

[Osayidan]

I wanna see D:

[Paul]

link for those who were to lazy to subscribe?

[Trevor]

I want to see it owo'!

[Drifter]

Ivonna Seeit
is a friend of mine
also...

I WANT TO SEE IT D:

[Paul]

Ah, I totally mis-read the thread.

[Lie]

If you still need more, I'll help critique.

[Compass]

I want to be the Simon D:
Please ;___;?

[Serathx]

Lol, you have like a pile of people waiting.
But I was the one who helped make the renders for the video, so may I see it? owo

[Hiccup]

link for those who were to lazy to subscribe?
GET OUT!

Oh wait go subscribe and I'll let you stay peacefully!!! >:o

Lol, you have like a pile of people waiting.
But I was the one who helped make the renders for the video, so may I see it? owo
Lol course you can! and I know. This is a lil more then I was expecting owo

41 mins left. RENDERING IS A BISH!

[Lan]

Soon?

[Serathx]

SOON, SOON.
*Dun dun dun duuunnnnnnnn*

[Hiccup]

9 minutes till its done uploading to youtube

[Serathx]

...*Poke*
*Is impatient*

[Kazuni]

Are you rendering in HD?

If so, gg.

I can usually get a 5 minute video done in 7. Just make it so that it's exactly youtube size. Best quality etcetc.

Although rendering is giving me all sorts of crap lately and killing my videos, so I basically gave up on it. TEMPORARILY. One day I'll figure out what's wrong with that crap ._.

[Hiccup]

Are you rendering in HD?

If so, gg.

I can usually get a 5 minute video done in 7. Just make it so that it's exactly youtube size. Best quality etcetc.

Although rendering is giving me all sorts of crap lately and killing my videos, so I basically gave up on it. TEMPORARILY. One day I'll figure out what's wrong with that crap ._.
HD yes :I The upload kills my internet D:<

TECHNICAL ISSUES!

Stay tuned! Should be up within the hour

[Time]

...Lol, more like technical fail..

[Hiccup]

Youtube is very tempermental.

Uploading the video to photobucket ;_;

[Time]

Youtube is very tempermental.

Uploading the video to photobucket ;_;

Its gonna be okay...

[Serathx]

*Gives Brad a Chocolate Chunk Cookie*
D:

[Hiccup]

Got it on megavideo but now its converting. w/e that is ;__;

[Hiccup]

http://mabination.com/mabinogi/multimedia-fantasy/5703-nationtv-intro-beta-uploaded-ready-watch.html#post97650