What do you think so far?

[Aryiane]

I drew this last night and it's my first time using a different angle like this--I've never really been good at it so I was hoping for some feedback before it's too late to fix it. I'm currently in the middle of coloring it. Also, I feel like the leg on the right is a little...strange but I'm not sure on how to make it seem 'natural-looking'.

Any constructive criticism is welcomed.



EDIT::

It's finally finished...

First stage: Pencil and Paper


Second Stage: (The first picture shown) Coloring.

Third Stage: Completion!


I tried to make the leg longer, but unfortunately it wasn't as much as I wanted. I'm no good with backgrounds so it's left white...I plan to work on drawing those next.

[Cucurbita]

You need to spawn more overlords before coloring any more.

[Hexed]

REALLY good so far! I wish i could draw as good as you. And about the right leg, i'd just say make the thigh a little longer, it looks short compared to the other leg.

[Aryiane]

REALLY good so far! I wish i could draw as good as you. And about the right leg, i'd just say make the thigh a little longer, it looks short compared to the other leg.

Thank you! And that's kind of what I was thinking as well. I'll get right on that then. ^^

[Cucurbita]

REALLY good so far! I wish i could draw as good as you. And about the right leg, i'd just say make the thigh a little longer, it looks short compared to the other leg.

>right leg

[Timotei]

>right leg

Image dun goofed, I would assume it's something related to katawa shoujo

[Cucurbita]

Thats what I get for hotlinking...

[Aryiane]

It's finally finished.

[Cucurbita]

It's finally finished.

Its very good!

But did you construct enough pylons?

Edit: The colors feel a little hard. I'm thinking the contrast is too strong.

[Aryiane]

Its very good!

But did you construct enough pylons?

Edit: The colors feel a little hard. I'm thinking the contrast is too strong.

Thank you!

It more than likely is lol. When it comes to Paint tool sai I only know how to go over messy lines to make them look better and color with pretty colors.