Mabinog/Vindictusi Related

[Mabbi]

Drawings I did:







For funnzies!

[Skye]

I like the Vindi one the bestest. :3

[Mabbi]

I like the Vindi one the bestest. :3

ty! ish my dream armour >:3

[Murasaki]

Did deviantART start allowing hotlinking? 8D

I had to quote because it's not showing up here DX

[Athde]

These. Are. Awesome! Way better than anything I could do, srsly

On the first one, the spirit's mouth is... odd

[Murasaki]

Ah, now they show up on here. I"ll crit really fast because I'm procrastinating right now.

Top one: Knee on standing leg is too high, and the leg looks slightly twisted in relation to her pelvis.

Middle: Really like it. Make his head pop a bit more. Right now it fades a bit too much so I keep putting my attention on the lower half of the body.

Bottom: I'm having a really hard time understanding the perspective of the foot in the foreground. Maybe the contour lines are off? I'm not sure what the direction is supposed to be so I'm not sure what to say on that.

Overall they're all really nice, though. Just some things that bother me, detracting from the coolness of the rest of the image.

[Science]

The worms in the vindi one look uber scary xD

[Mabbi]

Ah, now they show up on here. I"ll crit really fast because I'm procrastinating right now.

Top one: Knee on standing leg is too high, and the leg looks slightly twisted in relation to her pelvis.

Middle: Really like it. Make his head pop a bit more. Right now it fades a bit too much so I keep putting my attention on the lower half of the body.

Bottom: I'm having a really hard time understanding the perspective of the foot in the foreground. Maybe the contour lines are off? I'm not sure what the direction is supposed to be so I'm not sure what to say on that.

Overall they're all really nice, though. Just some things that bother me, detracting from the coolness of the rest of the image.

Thanks for the critiques! I appreciate anything >.<, however these are a few months older and I can even now noticed things that are off that I didn't notice then.
Honestly, I don't know what the angle is of the Vindictus one XD I was drawing from memory.

@Athde:

I was trying to make him look like he was smirking XD

[Taycat]

Did deviantART start allowing hotlinking? 8D

I had to quote because it's not showing up here DX

I've always been able to hotlink my stuff :>

These are quite awesome, I have to say!

[Cucurbita]

The last one.

I greatly approve.