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Yuminia wrote on 2010-11-13 04:05
Well, you saw the pictures from when I was doing it slowly. Well here is my finished version of it for now.
[Image: http://i51.tinypic.com/2gt9sfn.jpg]
As always, I love being critiqued.
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Skye wrote on 2010-11-13 04:11
The curve of the stem is thinner than any other part of the stem. And the leaf doesn't seem to be attached, it's just hidden behind the stem.
Personally, I like your petal coloring, but something still seems off about the petals' proportions or something. :/
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Yuminia wrote on 2010-11-13 04:15
I noticed that when I flipped it around so I could finish with the rest of the shading. The left most petal is longer than the rest. ^^;; shall fix it later. And did not notice that the curve was thinner. ^^;;
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Adelynn wrote on 2010-11-13 04:25
The outline at the center of the flower is a bit distracting. Some of the nice darks on flowers happen towards the center so it feels a bit off. The petals look much better than last time, though. :D
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Yuminia wrote on 2010-11-13 04:27
Merci beaucoup Adelynn. And that would be a major white spot that I did not see. . . *too long staring at computer*
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Adelynn wrote on 2010-11-13 05:06
Haha. It happens. I've done it a few times. At least you're not like Nexon, where they had a bad transparency issue with one of their banners. XD
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-11-13 05:57
It gets dark way too fast, just sayin
Good otherwise
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Kazuni wrote on 2010-11-13 06:02
The stem doesn't attach to the right spot if you continue the lines, and the middle of the flower is too dark/flat.
As much as I love colour, it's a bit too saturated.
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Adelynn wrote on 2010-11-15 17:40
I think the problem isn't so much that it's saturated, but that the most saturated colors are all pretty much warm colors, Maybe some cool colors would help balance it out.
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-11-15 20:46
My biggest problem with it is just the shading of it. The stem has lil shading and doesn't look attached to the flower, and the petals look flat
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Adelynn wrote on 2010-11-15 22:12
Yeah. I'd say that but someone already did. Also, I haven't really drawn that many flowers so I can only say what I'm sure about. x~x