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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-08 02:47
Just like to mention that this is one of my first real attempt to make a poem, so it probably sucks.:thumb:
Just followed a simple rhyme scheme (ababcdcdefefghgh) and went with that. CRITIC ME TO THE DEATH >:D.
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The land of beginners, Tir Chonnail
Where the wolves and foxes are roaming free
This is the place, to start a tale
Beginners doing quests, as monsters flee.
Dunbarton, the city of commerce
Players come here, just to hang out
Because this is the city where we converse
The place to be for a timeout.
Emain Macha, surrounded by water
This is the place, to compete as a cook
Challenge the Arena, to muster your power
Relax near the restaurant, reading a book.
The town of mining, Bangor
For the natural resources are abundant
Rank 1 refine, we adore
Sell your ores, to be a fine merchant.
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Kayate wrote on 2010-05-08 03:08
It's actually not bad:thumb:
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Time wrote on 2010-05-08 03:10
Good job my merchant pal! Now do all the other cities. lol
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-08 04:01
Quote from Timexpo;31039:
Good job my merchant pal! Now do all the other cities. lol
Oh god. No >:D.
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Cannibal wrote on 2010-05-08 04:02
i like this ok? ok.
make one about Saani.
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-08 04:09
I'll give you a quatrain
Saani's Quatrain
Saani says she loves you
But we all know, she is pure evil
She reeks like ones own poo
Saani, you are the devil.
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Kayate wrote on 2010-05-08 04:40
Quote from Chocklitshop;31093:
I'll give you a quatrain
Saani's Quatrain
Saani says she loves you
But we all know, she is pure evil
She reeks like ones own poo
Saani, you are the devil.
Awesome poem:thumb:
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Cannibal wrote on 2010-05-08 04:50
Quote from Chocklitshop;31093:
I'll give you a quatrain
Saani's Quatrain
Saani says she loves you
But we all know, she is pure evil
She reeks like ones own poo
Saani, you are the devil.
ihu.
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-08 04:52
Quote from Saani;31119:
ihu.
ily 2
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Sooni wrote on 2010-05-09 11:25
heres my poem attempt
from the marginal continent so far away
flowing upon fate comes a wind of love
it paints my fingertips filling me with sorrowful homesickness
calling scents and colors to the old capital
with its name engrave on the wind as it flows again i arrive at
a land no one has yet seen
a land that pulses with life
o wind o wind of love once again return to my hand
o gallent continent if you are thread upon
i would say people are to this world the light of its end
i grasp your right hand and set free to wave this transient life
filled with regretful emotions and and will waving like a banner
at the foot of this mountain as always which hides my footsteps
i call upon an unanswerable prayer and
keep flowing along in the same vein
i call upon a group of transparent precious souls dancing in the sand
to people filled with regret this fulfills their single hope
in the end in reminiscnce thoughts will race each's own place
if this birds heart is brought along with it i'll entrust it to my wings
in even this strange and dangerous world fate has one layer of truth
i wonder when people will awaken to this light of life?
o wind o wind of love
rain down gently upon the people
o eastern wind draw and raise the floodgates upon their wishes even now
the wind rustles and goes on its way
looking down upon the town i've always known
in your right hand i sleep
and let shine dazzling life
if anyone can guess where this is from i'll give them 100k in game monies in tarlach