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Mama wrote on 2011-01-28 23:53
its undeniably sexual, so the whole perv reaction isn't that surprising. but it's more romantic than porn-y.
it's very nice :3
the only thing that bothers me is the flowers, they seem very 2-D in comparison to the skin, but i'm not sure why.
I think it's the space that is suggested that they take up isn't corresponding to the position of her left arm and hand.
I'd give it more body and appear to spill over onto her arms, so that it appear like she's actually holding real flowers.
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Skye wrote on 2011-01-29 00:05
I really like it!! :D But to me the face seems really small. ._. Or maybe the hair's just really big!! :O I dunno. Something just seems off about the head in general.
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Cannibal wrote on 2011-01-29 00:06
I really liked the finished product. The way you make eyes is adorable.
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Shirayuki wrote on 2011-01-29 00:09
Now I have to rush past your sig every time you post if one of my parents is a around ; ;
But I really like it :D
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paladin wrote on 2011-01-29 00:25
You mind posting the song you were suppose to create a pic for?
And nice drawing
Its more on that whole romance feel then the sexy feel
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Osayidan wrote on 2011-01-29 00:26
I approve of conveniently covered nudity.
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ValkyrieHamster wrote on 2011-01-29 00:41
Quote from Mama;308689:
the only thing that bothers me is the flowers, they seem very 2-D in comparison to the skin, but i'm not sure why.
I think it's the space that is suggested that they take up isn't corresponding to the position of her left arm and hand.
I'd give it more body and appear to spill over onto her arms, so that it appear like she's actually holding real flowers.
It sort of appears that she's using the side of her hand to hold up a flat object to cover up her naught bits, or that it was added on later as a censor.
Like mama said you could add more body to it, one way would be to make it look like her hand is holding part of it, since the way her hand is positioned the flowers would naturally fall into it. Though conversely if you changed the hand to make it go flat against the flowers it would make it seem more like she's pushing it to herself which I think would help to remove the sense that the flowers are disconnected from the drawing.
Either way, awesome coloring, love the facial expression :3
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Adelynn wrote on 2011-01-29 00:45
Miip, responses!
@Mama: Thank you very much! I had a different concept for the flowers at first, but then realized it could look kind of creepy, so I dripped it. No time to re-do the whole thing now since it's due Monday and I have other classes to do homework for, but I agree on your points. I'd like to go back to the flowers sometime.
@Skye: I tend to draw "large" hair, as you put it. The head size is correct, and so is the size of the head itself. I use head heights to measure body, but draw the hair higher than where I draw the top of the head.
@Mike: Thank you! I like drawing eyes. I didn't take as much time with these as usual but I still like them.
@Shirayuki: I've seen more suggestive on this forum. Keep an eye out for your parents anyway, though!
@paladin: It's a love song, but I won't say which just yet. The image in my head was more romantic than sexual, but I can definitely see why it would be read that way, and I added that direction in too, at least a bit.
@Osaydan: XD! That means I get to keep my sig. >D
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Skye wrote on 2011-01-29 03:04
Quote from Osayidan;308758:
I approve of conveniently covered nudity.
You would. :P
Quote from Adelynn;308784:
@Skye: I tend to draw "large" hair, as you put it. The head size is correct, and so is the size of the head itself. I use head heights to measure body, but draw the hair higher than where I draw the top of the head.
I see, I see. But I really do like it. Awestruck... ;-;
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Adelynn wrote on 2011-01-29 03:40
Quote from ValkyrieHamster;308779:
It sort of appears that she's using the side of her hand to hold up a flat object to cover up her naught bits, or that it was added on later as a censor.
Like mama said you could add more body to it, one way would be to make it look like her hand is holding part of it, since the way her hand is positioned the flowers would naturally fall into it. Though conversely if you changed the hand to make it go flat against the flowers it would make it seem more like she's pushing it to herself which I think would help to remove the sense that the flowers are disconnected from the drawing.
Either way, awesome coloring, love the facial expression :3
I just realized I skipped you. D8 I'm sorryyyy.
Hopefully I can get it to work. I'll bug you guys for help, if anything. X'D Thanks for the suggestions!
Skye, you can point things out if they feel weird, no worries.
"Awestruck" is very nice of you. x////x
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Mama wrote on 2011-01-29 04:11
:D
you're getting better every time, and I like to give constructive critiques, so feel free to post anything and everythiiing
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Skye wrote on 2011-01-29 04:12
Quote from Adelynn;308963:
Skye, you can point things out if they feel weird, no worries.
"Awestruck" is very nice of you. x////x
You are talented enough to deserve it. :)
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Adelynn wrote on 2011-01-29 04:24
Thanks again to both of you. I have my Spirited Away re-designs I need to do, in a style that isn't really "mine" so we'll see how that goes. It can't be anime or anything more realistic than, say, the style used for Gorillaz videos. It's a fun project, though.
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Adelynn wrote on 2011-02-18 01:40
New thing on the front page, if anyone cares 8D
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Taycat wrote on 2011-02-18 02:10
They look cool.
And they are not craptastic!
Who needs shading anyway?