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Nanaho wrote on 2011-03-07 00:56
[Image: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/065/1/2/nana_charge_by_koikai-d3b2ve5.png]
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Cynic wrote on 2011-03-07 01:02
Would you like a critic? o:
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Nanaho wrote on 2011-03-07 01:03
Quote from Cynic;362964:
Would you like a critic? o:
Yus
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Taycat wrote on 2011-03-07 01:03
I'll give short critic.
Overall, it's good. Concept is well understood, there are just a few errors here and there.
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Mentosftw wrote on 2011-03-07 01:04
I hope that's a giant. I would be very displeased if you went outside of Mabinogi rules.
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Cynic wrote on 2011-03-07 01:05
kz0rz. Wasn't too sure. xD
1st, I love the coloring/shading. Nice, simple, great colors and done very well. The shading also looks very smooth.
The position is a bit awkward, but otherwise I think you did very good on the body in general. The hair and the face are what get me the most, honestly-- the hair looks a bit choppy near the ends (unless it's meant to be that way) and the face.. mm.. I don't know, but there's something kind of off about it. o_O Perhaps it's just me.
Otherwise, though, I like it <3
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Nanaho wrote on 2011-03-07 01:06
Quote from Mentosftw;362973:
I hope that's a giant. I would be very displeased if you went outside of Mabinogi rules.
I went outside Mabinogi rules and into my own dream world where I wish humans could have a two handed Francisca.
Edit: Yeah, I'm still working on getting the bodies right.