Mabi fanfic thingy

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Shizuo wrote on 2011-04-14 09:39

Not sure if I should put this here, or multimedia fantasy D: If you think it should be moved, then that's fine orz;
Also, I KNOW THIS IS A PIECE OF CRAP RIGHT NOW, OKAAAAY? ;O; my writing style needs serious work since it's been so long... orz;;
And please, PLEASE read the author's comment thing at the bottom before reading chapter 1 :c

Chapter 1 here:
http://vinostanfield.deviantart.com/art/Mabinogi-Fanfic-Part-1-204838949?q=gallery%3Avinostanfield&qo=1

and Chapter 2 here:
http://vinostanfield.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3dyevx

I'm still working on chapter 3, so I'll post it when I finish! I'm kind of waiting on more critique before I finish it, though xD;;
Please be gentle ;o;
psyal wrote on 2011-04-14 16:02

Well, I though it was good, for one. I'd be interested in reading the following chapters, when they're out.
otto wrote on 2011-04-14 16:18

Already attacked it on dA, but i love it :D

btw, have i ever told you how much i love you for naming your dA after the Rail Tracer? â™¥â™¥â™¥
Shizuo wrote on 2011-04-14 18:40

Quote from otto;409514:
Already attacked it on dA, but i love it :D

btw, have i ever told you how much i love you for naming your dA after the Rail Tracer? â™¥â™¥â™¥

Ahahaha XD omg finally someone who got it.

And thanks for your comments guys :D I'll get to work on chapter 3, then.
otto wrote on 2011-04-14 18:55

Quote from muyo;409654:
Ahahaha XD omg finally someone who got it.

And thanks for your comments guys :D I'll get to work on chapter 3, then.

Of course! More people need to know the awesome that is Baccano!
Shizuo wrote on 2011-04-15 06:20

Well, I've decided that I'm going to update with two chapters at a time. So next time I post, it'll be 3 AND 4. Hopefully, I won't suffer from any more writer's block.
Thanks for the comments again and remember that constructive criticism is welcome XD
Shizuo wrote on 2011-04-17 03:38

Well, here's a little short story thing I did about something that actually happened.

http://vinostanfield.deviantart.com/art/Mabi-short-1-205193122

I'll put those here too since those could be entertaining, I guess. If I could draw, I'd make it a comic, but yeah XD
I'm experiencing some writer's block with Chapter 3 at the moment, so I did this instead. You'll still get 3 & 4, so don't worry D: