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Erubus wrote on 2010-05-23 03:08
Ok I have the form and rhyme scheme right, just not the 10 syllables per line =<
The night's everlasting kiss
A moment so real
A time I will miss
It all felt so real
As our bodies melt into one
The room is heating
There is so much fun
Our hearts are rapidly beating
Lovers of the night
In a constant fight
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-23 03:11
Not bad.
The syllables are probably the hardest part of making a sonnet xD.
Also missing 1 more quatrain? o3o
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Erubus wrote on 2010-05-23 03:11
Dammit D; i thought it was 2 quatrains T.T
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-23 03:14
abab cdcd efef gg xD
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Erubus wrote on 2010-05-23 03:15
SHHHH i thought it was abab eded ff =< i'll work on another quatrain later, but first i need to get the syllables straightened out
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-23 03:16
Quote from Erubus;41829:
SHHHH i thought it was abab eded ff =< i'll work on another quatrain later, but first i need to get the syllables straightened out
Good luck then :D.
:thumb:
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Erubus wrote on 2010-05-23 03:17
Yea i'll end up failing most likely and very hard when i do, /wants to get it finished so if i have to write one for english i can have one ready
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-23 03:49
xD.
I might have to make a poem in my next english class.
-Steals-
Jkin (OR MAYBE >:D)!
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BobYoMeowMeow wrote on 2010-05-23 21:10
Quote from Chocklitshop;41828:
abab cdcd efef gg xD
the person who isn't an English speaker correcting one who is a native speaker
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Arsik wrote on 2010-05-23 21:24
Quote from BobYoMeowMeow;42288:
the person who isn't an English speaker correcting one who is a native speaker
What does being a native English speaker have to do with poetry?
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Chockeh wrote on 2010-05-24 02:06
Quote from BobYoMeowMeow;42288:
the person who isn't an English speaker correcting one who is a native speaker
Hell yeah man 8D!
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Erubus wrote on 2010-05-25 21:40
Go ahead and do it then chock o3o doesnt bother me, i kinda gave up on it, too lazy to make another quatrain and fix the syllables