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Sedia wrote on 2011-05-29 00:57
And all of a sudden I came up with this poem sorta thing:
I tried to take a picture of the sky last night
but the city's lights were way too bright
I wish I could have shown you the stars
but my camera doesn't zoom in that far
I wish I could've today
Shown you my drawing of the Milky Way
If the city's light's weren't always bright
then maybe there would be a way
we would see it
together
The poem is about two people who live in different countries. One lives in a huge city, while the other lives on the country side. Their time zones are different too. So the 1st person (girl or boy) tries to take a picture to send to the 2nd person (bf/gf/sis/bro/etc),but the lights in the city are too bright. And they can't take pictures of the stars (imagining how my camera doesn't zoom for crap). So the first person ends up drawing a picture of the Milky Way for the second person and wants to show them,then wonders how they'll ever be able to experience the same thing (at different times of course) without the city's lights ruining it.
My mind is so random....
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Rahannnn wrote on 2011-05-29 01:01
This is so beautiful.
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Jelly wrote on 2011-05-29 01:01
That's a beautiful poem.
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Sedia wrote on 2011-05-29 01:09
Quote from Rahannnn;458567:
This is so beautiful.
Quote from Jelly;458570:
That's a beautiful poem.
Aw, thanks guys!
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Mrlucky77 wrote on 2011-05-29 01:26
I can has steal?
It's very good.
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Skye wrote on 2011-05-29 01:30
I think it's wonderful. :)
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otto wrote on 2011-05-29 01:33
That's so pretty and kinda bittersweet ;n;
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Rahannnn wrote on 2011-05-29 01:56
Quote from Mrlucky77;458598:
I can has steal?
It's very good.
/same.
I need poem for writing class and dis get me A++++++++. I already got A++++++++ for using wikipedia. I didn't plagirise though.
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Ryoko wrote on 2011-05-29 01:57
What a heart-warming poem. x3
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cupid wrote on 2011-05-29 02:09
This made me d'awwww. Plus rep for chu!
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Sedia wrote on 2011-05-29 02:49
Quote from Mrlucky77;458598:
I can has steal?
It's very good.
Quote from Rahannnn;458641:
/same.
I need poem for writing class and dis get me A++++++++. I already got A++++++++ for using wikipedia. I didn't plagirise though.
Just make sure you give credit to me for the original poem if you use it.
Quote from cupid;458670:
This made me d'awwww. Plus rep for chu!
Awww! Thank you! :DDDD