Anyone can critisise this song?

• Lawrence wrote on 2011-10-19 05:39
  My father built a huge studio in the house's basement so i decided to twich around the pianos and made a few midi file(i then used 3ml to make mabinogi code for scrolls) if anyone can please listen and critic if its not good tell me k?
  
  http://www.4shared.com/audio/GRO7Ejbl/Nazo_Nomurasame_Jou.html?
  
  Scroll code for mabinogi players
  
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