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Phunkie wrote on 2010-07-19 05:44
Just so you won't forget, you mispelled Osayidan's name.
You wrote Osayidin. lmao
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Sloth wrote on 2010-07-19 05:46
You also misspelled Isharo1 not Isharo13 D:<
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 05:46
Quote from Randomcheese;97673:
Just got done with eating a cookie irl :D
It was pretty good though. It was also just the intro so you don't want to overdo a intro because then the people expect a great deal more
All my videos are gonna be pretty heavy on editing, maybe not so much on the effects but definitely putting more time into it. This one took me about roughly 16 hours to put together.
Quote from Kazuni;97675:
I'M GOING TO PICK OUT ALL THE DETAILED ERRORS AND THROW THEM AT YOU K D:<
DON'T CRY BRAD IT'S OKAY.
/will do sometime tomorrow because Kaz is tired now.
I like critiques orz
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Kazuni wrote on 2010-07-19 05:48
Quote from bradstrt;97679:
All my videos are gonna be pretty heavy on editing, maybe not so much on the effects but definitely putting more time into it. This one took me about roughly 16 hours to put together.
I like critiques orz
God you work fast. It takes me at least a week to put together a 3 minute mmv. Then again, it has a hell lot more layers and effects since I'm a spaz about getting every single little detail right. Also because the sprites hate me and don't want to work with me. Maplestory is putting me through hell even after I quit. (and being as lazy as I am doesn't help.)
AND YOU WON'T LIKE MY CRITIQUE.
Now imma stop spamming up your thread and go find something to actually eat.
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 05:51
Lol, perfectionist! I don't do animations so maybe thats why :x
AND YES I WILL! But I could say artistic differences xD;;
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Ninjam wrote on 2010-07-19 05:54
The only real critique i had was the dancing scene that took up a lot of the video, and i didnt even realize it was mabinogi characters until a good 5 minutes after i finished watching it.
I dont make videos or use video editing software though, so my complaint is irrelevent and of no use to anyone cause i have no clue what im talking about.
That and im just about to pass out from the 4 hour car drive back from halfway across the state.
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 05:56
Again, its only fillers cause only 18 people gave me videos, and/or screenshots
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Phunkie wrote on 2010-07-19 05:57
Okay, can we all agree that....
Brad = Man of the Hour
:2thumb:
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 06:05
Updated first post~
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Kazuni wrote on 2010-07-19 06:08
I decided I might as well finish this since I've got nothing to do and I can't sleep and I'll be out for most of the day tomorrow.
I took random notes on onenote while I rewatched twice and this is what I got. If you don't get it or something, just watch through again, it's in order xD.
Some of it is confusing... I couldn't decipher some of it myself.
• Beginning too long
• Nao+Morrighan – Body cropping
• No transition to next
• Beam of light colour on Mabination (Blue? Clashes.)
• Cropping yet again
• Nao spin awkward lol
• Same twin repeated = much too obvious
• Fonnttt nooo (I will repeat this until it’s drilled in everyone’s head.)
• Cropping again
• Dancing cropped on bottom and top, move the sides in on pan/crop.
• Dance scene too long; takes away from mabination scenes in comparison.
• Yeah too long
• Why are her nipples showing through her dress? Lol.
• Glow effect on green font makes me cry. TTnTT
• Red black overused, the glow + the outline on the text itself makes me shudder.
• No transition again
• Cropped Brad scene, but I’m sure you know about this already
• Weird border – I forgot why I wrote this but I think it was for the icky brown border.
• Punkie looks funny trololol
• Background too dark, the white looks gray
• Waving render cut off, cropping yet again
• No background?
• Cut off
• Placing and proportion problems
• Cut off a little off beginning of zid scene where he falls on the ground for a less chippy feel
• Cropping again
• Ninjam - some video problems including action -> bow, but that can’t be helped. The ego incarnation (was it?) was hard to recognize.
• Gaps between clapping.
• Crop that purple font yo, outline/glow is cut, although if you change the font, unbold it, make it white, then put the outline in black, it’ll look nicer and more uniform, especially if you do this for other parts in the video. Right now it looks a bit childish.
• Names, hp bar, but you can't do anything about that
• WRYY NEON BLUE FONT
• Morrighan glowing so distracting, zoomed out, npc renders getting tired.
• STOP MOVING, TEXT
• Lol why white border on Chock?
• Repeating images with white background
• Loved the following scenes, but some weren't nation, taking away our part again
• The transition
• Repeats twin and Nao?
• Moree danccingg wryyy, and this one has the black border outside and the first one doesn't. Again, the cropping, and the scene is again too long.
• Zoom in crop wasn't cut well.
• Melt transition destroyed her face yo.
• Don't like the scan lines on the text in the end
• Zoom in on those credit images, make it take up more of the screen instead of looking like a scroll bar.
• Why white background on that Nao? Perfectionist senses tingling plz.
• Double twinn noooo
• No transition to Morrighan, light rays awkward, left one too sudden.
• AND THE TEXXT NOOOO.
Some of them are random and annoying, while others actually had stuff behind it.
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Phunkie wrote on 2010-07-19 06:11
She called me both Punkie and funny.
I love you, Kaz.
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 06:16
owo I got most of it cause I spent hours working on it. I already know about the backgrounds on some people's parts. It honestly looked fine in Vegas. Dancing is fillers for when more people gimme some stuff to work with. Quality/content of the videos can't be helped as it fully depends on how the people uploaded it. White background looks grey on the stripes cause it's not transparent. I have to work with what my photoshop helper did, and trust me we've been pm'ing each other back and forth for 2 days trying to get all this stuff to work. I'm practically working her to death XD;; White border on Chock wasn't there in vegas, like a lot of them weren't. I had to use chroma key on some of the renders because the background refused to be transparent. Its transparent everywhere else but vegas. It's a lil hard also to get all the different character showcases to be interesting :I I can work on it though. I wouldn't have as many fillers if people would send me stuff. Del and Delen are the same pic cause I could not find a render of them separated. Also on the renders and outlines, again I can only work my helper so much. I have to use what I receive.
I'll start recording more in game stuff though. But it'd just be me mostly....... ;_;
Wall of text much :x
I'll fix what I can though.
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Piko wrote on 2010-07-19 06:18
If there comes situations where you need images rendered to be put into vids, gimme whatever shet you need to render and I'll see what I can do in my free time. Don't gimme too much shet though.
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Hiccup wrote on 2010-07-19 06:19
I have em rendered, but it's not perfect. It wont look perfect once it goes into vegas.
And there is A LOT of renders to do.
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Kazuni wrote on 2010-07-19 06:20
Quote from bradstrt;97696:
owo I got most of it cause I spent hours working on it. I already know about the backgrounds on some people's parts. It honestly looked fine in Vegas. Dancing is fillers for when more people gimme some stuff to work with. Quality/content of the videos can't be helped as it fully depends on how the people uploaded it. White background looks grey on the stripes cause it's not transparent. I have to work with what my photoshop helper did, and trust me we've been pm'ing each other back and forth for 2 days trying to get all this stuff to work. I'm practically working her to death XD;; White border on Chock wasn't there in vegas, like a lot of them weren't. I had to use chroma key on some of the renders because the background refused to be transparent. Its transparent everywhere else but vegas. It's a lil hard also to get all the different character showcases to be interesting :I I can work on it though. I wouldn't have as many fillers if people would send me stuff. Del and Delen are the same pic cause I could not find a render of them separated. Also on the renders and outlines, again I can only work my helper so much. I have to use what I receive.
I'll start recording more in game stuff though. But it'd just be me mostly....... ;_;
Wall of text much :x
I'll fix what I can though.
For the twins, because I'm lazy and don't want to reply with another wall, that's just one twin, isn't it? The mouth looks the same. And just put a masking layer over it. Boom easy.
EY YOU PUNKY YOU TRY TYPING REALLY FAST DURING A 6 MINUTE VIDEO WHILE DREADING AN ANNOYING COUNSELOR COURSE THING TOMORROW AND AISUDHCIUSAGFIDSGVSFDIHVDSIURAAAAGING OVER SOMETHING THAT YOU DON'T EVEN--
K I don't even know why.