First time using my tablet in months

• Hexed wrote on 2013-02-20 18:42
  I was never good with it to begin with, but I was pretty rusty considering I'm not much of a drawer and its been months since I did anything on the computer. But anyways, I drew the new class for Rena in the game Elsword, the Trapping Ranger!
  

  [Image: http://imageshack.us/a/img40/3653/trappingrangerwip.png]

  
  
  You can give me criticism, but be gentle! :llama_blush:
  Idk if i'll color it, as I'm even worse at coloring than I am at lineart, but I might try and just not publish it unless it turns out good.
• Ashikoki wrote on 2013-02-20 18:46
  color it!
• Hexed wrote on 2013-02-21 22:15
  I decided to color it. How did I do with coloring?
  

  [Image: http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3177/trappingranger.png]

  
  I'm not very efficient with coloring, this whole thing took me like 8 hours in total.
• Grumpycat wrote on 2013-02-21 23:42
  :thumb:
• Ashikoki wrote on 2013-02-22 00:26

  Quote from Hexed;1036951:

  I decided to color it. How did I do with coloring?
  

  [Image: http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3177/trappingranger.png]

  
  I'm not very efficient with coloring, this whole thing took me like 8 hours in total.

  
  
  8 hours!
  
  Maybe I should've actually come back to suggest some changes in the line art BEFORE the coloring.
  
  It actually looks pretty decent though!
• Hexed wrote on 2013-02-22 02:50
  Thanks! And yeah 8 hours, I made a lot of mistakes.
  And you can still make comments on any changes you would make, I could use it to help improve myself.
• Eirys wrote on 2013-02-22 02:52
  I'd say widen those hips, she is a woman after all. Also her arms should be a bit thinner.
  
  But just keep practicing, this is 100x better then anything I could ever conjure up.
  
  
  EDIT: Oh yeah I don't think her hands can go that way lol
• Hexed wrote on 2013-02-22 02:58
  Oh yeah I did realize that with the hips when I was doing the lineart, but I forgot to fix it v.v
  
  -Edit- Hmm I can kinda make a pose like that irl. xD
• Alendra wrote on 2013-02-23 06:52
  Her torso concerns me the most...its kind of noodley, like it has no structure? The torso supports a lot of the body, so thinking about how the weight is resting can help you avoid the sort of unbalanced-ness of the pose. You drew her legs giving her good support, try continuing that line through the whole pose!
• otto wrote on 2013-02-23 14:33
  Her torso is pretty long and "noodley" lol like Alendra said xD
  And the way her legs are turned compared to the rest of her body seems awkward to me.
  
  

  Quote from Eirys;1037137:

  I'd say widen those hips, she is a woman after all. Also her arms should be a bit thinner.
  But just keep practicing, this is 100x better then anything I could ever conjure up.
  
  EDIT: Oh yeah I don't think her hands can go that way lol

  
  
  Hips are irrelevant, arm size also irrelevant, and her hands are in a pretty normal pose. They just look awkward :I
• Hexed wrote on 2013-02-23 23:27
  Yeah I see what you mean about it being noodley.
  I'm not very good with anatomy and making poses yet, I've still got a loooong way to go.
• Ashikoki wrote on 2013-02-23 23:59
  The torso is the biggest problem. Her right side (our left) is more or less missing. Widen it a little. Her right shoulder seems to pull out too far, but is more or less correct length, this illusion being created by the lack of her right breasts and sides.
  
  Definitely need to put a little more emphasis on the hips.
  
  And her lower hand should be a little longer. The midsection between her wrist and knuckle is just a little too short and it makes it look a little bit stubby. I'll mess around with the line art later to see what I can do.
• ColdStar wrote on 2013-03-21 10:22
  i must admit that before you color it, it is not very good, but i just weonder is she /him a boy or girl?