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Murasaki wrote on 2014-10-15 04:27
Before:
[Image: https://38.media.tumblr.com/f419e02f3d974e95e39a74f2b0f14847/tumblr_ndgm7nM9vG1squ9wio1_400.png]
After:
[Image: https://38.media.tumblr.com/5dc0a1d65dda9ad4990c26efda2cb5c9/tumblr_ndgm7nM9vG1squ9wio2_400.png]
I didn't take the time to clean it up all that much but there you go.
It was
bugging me.
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JADT wrote on 2014-10-15 07:38
It certainly looks a lot better than the original.
I wish nexon would pick up on your talent one of these days. /nopunintendo.
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Taycat wrote on 2014-10-15 09:52
i prefer the original
the way she stands and her face implies her face is slightly turned to our left
maybe move the mouth just slightly and angle it a teeny weeny bit more and it'd look fine
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Code2008 wrote on 2014-10-15 15:28
Or they could of just used Japan's...
[Image: http://i.imgur.com/JSrB8qH.png]
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JADT wrote on 2014-10-15 20:47
Japan sucks, they wouldn't let us use anything without copyright bullshit.
Murasaki's edit is good. Starlet still looks like she's singing in the art, as opposed to the original where she looks like she's baiting oral from every millitian in errin..
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Murasaki wrote on 2014-10-16 00:44
Quote from JADT;1251053:
It certainly looks a lot better than the original.
I wish nexon would pick up on your talent one of these days. /nopunintendo.
But puns are great!
Quote from Taycat;1251064:
i prefer the original
the way she stands and her face implies her face is slightly turned to our left
maybe move the mouth just slightly and angle it a teeny weeny bit more and it'd look fine
To clarify: Do you like the original, or just prefer it to my edit? Because if you like it you might be the first person I know of, haha.
That curve goes way too far. Which is totally weird, because the artist is actually really good so I don't get this mouth at
all.
I should note, to make the edit faster, I used the curve of her lower lip and just drew over the open mouth. I think I maybe made it a bit smaller and moved it up a bit so there wouldn't be a huge gap between her nose and upper lip. And if she's slightly facing to the left, they didn't indicate that with the jawline very well.
Quote from Code2008;1251089:
Or they could of just used Japan's...
[Image: http://i.imgur.com/JSrB8qH.png]
Even Japan felt the need to edit. a;lkdsf
Quote from JADT;1251121:
Japan sucks, they wouldn't let us use anything without copyright bullshit.
Murasaki's edit is good. Starlet still looks like she's singing in the art, as opposed to the original where she looks like she's baiting oral from every millitian in errin..
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Yoorah wrote on 2014-10-16 02:34
The original's teeth look messed up--the teeth are pointing up when the rest of the face isn't. Maybe the artist got confused with which set of teeth moves when one opens their mouth.
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Tyskiyomy wrote on 2014-10-16 03:25
She looks creepy in all of them for me :whisper:
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Murasaki wrote on 2014-10-16 18:17
It's so weird because the artist is usually pretty good with mouths, including open ones.
[Image: http://puu.sh/ceKHj/0b70f71664.png]
This looks pretty normal.
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Taycat wrote on 2014-10-16 19:22
all artist's can have off days
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Murasaki wrote on 2014-10-16 20:27
Yeah, but if something looks off there are usually people telling the artist that something looks off so they can fix it, so what on earth happened there? Even people who don't really draw have noticed it.
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JADT wrote on 2014-10-16 22:31
It was probably a rush job.
Iria chapter 1 and 2 have very weird little tidbits where things were just rushed. Things like missing textures for objects and maps, things in cutscenes flying out of proportion, especially with how glitchy renes is with tossing things around.
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Second wrote on 2014-10-18 01:00
They eyes should be redone as well. They're too far apart.
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Taycat wrote on 2014-10-18 07:52
Quote from Second;1251407:
They eyes should be redone as well. They're too far apart.
actually, it's like, the left eye is on the nose bridge and the right eye is flying away
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Murasaki wrote on 2014-10-18 17:15
If the nose was moved closer to the center it would probably look normal. The eyes are about an eye's width apart which is technically normal. Maybe I'll bother with that later.